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they say a touch of madness
glimmers there behind her eyes,
          sparking storms that sing with light
                                  and haunting lullabies

They say a touch of madness,

is inside all of of us
speaking words we never would,
waiting, at the windowsill. 

It glimmers there behind her eyes,
waiting, longing
for the day of darkness,
it finally gets to be free.

Sparking storms that sing with light,
rolling thunder and flashing
lightning on the inside
of her mind.

Haunting lullabies
are softly singing
the never-spoken words
of madness
lingering...
This piece is an "expanded" version of FridgePoetProject's poem #361.

The Daily Magnet #361 by FridgePoetProject
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ReaderByLamplight Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016
Very impressive and truly gorgeous ! There is a haunting, fragile melancholy in both FridgePoetProject's version and yours, and you brilliantly managed to prolong the bittersweet spell. This really lingers in the mind...
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Yuukon Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2016   Photographer
Thank you! :heart:
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flamingodancer123 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2016
You have a spot in our featured folder in the group, :iconsharpenededge:
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Yuukon Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2016   Photographer
Thank you dear! :love:
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flamingodancer123 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2016
You're welcome.
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FridgePoetProject Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Wow -- the 3:00 a.m. stroke of genius certainly does not disappoint!!!  :faint:  This is phenomenal.  I love the way you broke the original into pieces and helped each line of it bloom into something greater and more magical.  Such a stunning Creation.  Gorgeous work once again, my dear, and this has been entered in the Festival as well!  :la: :highfive: 
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Yuukon Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016   Photographer
Thank you my dear :heart:
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flamingodancer123 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
Very beautiful poem, you are very talented with words!! Your work is very full of emotion. Thank you for submitting to the group, :iconsharpenededge: always a pleasure to read your work!!
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Yuukon Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016   Photographer
Thank you Cathy :heart:
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flamingodancer123 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
You are very welcome.
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