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lie to me
and tell me i'm wrong
tell me i'm wrong to get in
to the water

gleaming eyes
are fixed upon their reflections

lie to me
and tell me it's not worth it
tell me
i can do better than this

lie to me
and tell me it's okay
to be broken

tell me the bones
will heal
one day

lie to me
and tell me
that i am not falling
like a shooting star
in the night sky

lie to me
and tell me
that you will catch me
before i hit the ground
to be broken, isn't it?
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WingDiamond Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
:sing: Tell Me Lies Tell Me Sweet Lil Lies ... Tell Me Lies!
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Yuukon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2016   Photographer
:giggle:
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very emotional. I think we can all identify...those with a heart, anyway. :love:
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Yuukon Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013   Photographer
Thank you. <3 
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :)
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Writer
Need a hug? 
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Yuukon Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013   Photographer
Hugs are always very welcome, thank you.
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student Writer
*hugs you* Hug Huggle! 
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Yuukon Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013   Photographer
*hugs back*
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student Writer
Huggle! 
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redfoxj Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I read this poem and subconsciously I hear faint music as if it was lyrics to a song. The structure is nice, but it feels jagged. Of course, with this subject matter it may be more appropriate to be jagged rather than flowy. Otherwise, you do a great job putting your feelings into words. I love it.
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Yuukon Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013   Photographer
Thank you.
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